Personality Walk Cycle Feedback

After I completed my first draft of what I believed was my completed personality walk cycle, it got reviewed by the third years that do animation. During the review, I made some quick notes of the feedback on my phone during the time then copied the notes I quickly wrote at the time from my phone to my notebook.

From this feedback I received, I acted on the feedback and improved my animation and I hopefully will try to not allow such mistakes to happen in the future.